the dream

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by TheAsianInvasion (The Zone's invader) on Sunday, 09-Dec-2007 11:26:49

The Dream

I had a dream that will never come true,
I dreamt you loved me the way I love you.
Moonlight mist fell over the land,
I looked at you and you took my hand.
We walked through the stars to the Milky Way,
Side-by-side then you started to say,
Stay with me forever and I'll stay with you,
And loving each others the only thing we'll do.
Then I woke up and started to cry,
Realizing the whole thing, was only a lie.
I had a dream that will never come true,
I dreamt you loved me, the way I love you.

Post 2 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Monday, 10-Dec-2007 20:53:01

Very good, thanks for posting it.

Sounds like a song. Maybe you could sell it somewhere.

Bob

Post 3 by reclusive thinker (Veteran Zoner) on Friday, 14-Dec-2007 1:48:01

Well, I was so impressed with this poem that I googled some of the lyrics to see if I could find out who actually wrote it. I found the poem in six or seven places--collections of love poetry, Myspace pages, etc.--but nothing that told me who wrote it originally. Probably not the guy who submitted it here.

Post 4 by TheAsianInvasion (The Zone's invader) on Tuesday, 18-Dec-2007 3:33:30

yeah, I found it someware on google and thought I'd post it here...

Post 5 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Saturday, 05-Jan-2008 2:57:12

You should see some of the things I write.

Post 6 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Friday, 11-Jan-2008 14:19:53

That is so cool. I like it. Often how life works. You love the one that can't love yu back.